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i know i´m getting a bit worked up there and i´m sorry for that. But as i said i had my own share of experience with similar stuff and even after 30 years i´m still messed up and trying to work through all that fear, anger and hate inside. So it hits a bit to closer to home than i want to admit to myself when reading and writing about that. In summary i just want to say if you want him to be a believable and realistic character don´t just let him to be a naruto-like fool who would forgive even such atrocities :-D (always thought him to be probably one of the unrealistic written characters in all of manga history and that is a real low bar :-P )
Reincarneted or not shouldn´t really be a matter. She gave birth to a child thats all that matters. A childs brain, a childs an adults soul something like that breaks someone. Her actions made him a murderer, a cold blooded sociopathic murderer. Cortana is the one thing holding his little bit of sanity left together. What does she want to create? A superpowered Ted Bundy? A Jeffrey Dahmer who is like a god to oridanary humans? Or since we are talking about much Teen Wolf lore a horrific creature worse than Peter Hale, Kate and Deucalion combined?
And with every right. A parents job is to nurture and to protect their children. Throwing the child into a den of torture and killing and even laughing at it stands against anything what a mother or father is. There is a reason why most high profile criminals like serial killers and such come from abusive homes
My only hope is you will pit him against his mother to take revenge. I don´t care if she is a trickster or doing stupid shit like abandoning your child into a ninja clan and becoming a killer is a good thing in her mind. It IS child abuse nothing less and someone like that deserves worse. I know it is a story of fiction but i honestly hate people like that, be it real or fictional, with all of my heart. Her even looking after him and reveling and gloating at the torture and all the killing he has to go through disguts me. Your writing and style is good and this critique isn´t personal or anything like that it´s just i had my fair share of experience with abuse and stuff like that and i personally can´t see any reason for him to do anything than hating her. So enough with the depressing stuff i wish everone of you a merry christmas and a happy new year :-D
Hmm from what i remmember from Teen Wolf Lore Werewolfs are classified into Alpha, Beta and Omega. Alpha is the Packleader, the Betas are the packwolfs and the Omegas are the lone wolfs abandoned or survivors of destroyed packs. Which means every accepted member of the pack is a beta
YES Shoulder loli. As it should be :-D
His arm and leg weren´t the problem if i remember right. He should still be nearly crippled without Tsunades help. From what i remember the problem were boneshards stabbing in his spine after opening the fifth gate
True the only Hokage after Hashirama with Kekkai Genkai was Naruto with Lava Release, Magnet Release, Boil Release and Yin-Yang Release though no one can say if he still has access to those after he lost Kurama
Naruto never had a Sage Body like Hashirama did. The reason behind Narutos self-healing is Kurama and his Uzumaki heritage. Hashirama was different even among other Senjus. While all Senjus have high Chakralevels Hashiramas Cells were completly different and more inclined to the bodys of the Otsutsukis hence the cancerous growth of his cells when implanted to the point that Hashiramas face grew on Madaras body. Even Tsunade had to invent an incomplete jutsu to gain only a fraction of his selfhealing powers at the cost of her own lifespan