Devastator

wow what a mistake

Thanks for the chapter

yes, character development, MC doesn't even realise himself until later he's not upset that he tortured envy, she is nothing to him, but he's upset because he saw no problem with It. i could write a MC who who can resist corruption but that way he isn't a normal person anymore. anyway he doesn't really need a lot of character development but i saw a opportunity and use it to make a little character development

i know and he also understand this in the next chapter, and as I said in the next chapter, it's corruption from power, he thought he can easily heal her mentally later with system or just make her forget or make up for her so he didn't have problem torturing her and he is also a amateur in changing people mind anyway later he see he could do something better than torture and us something else. in the chapter 44 he understands that he's changing, after all he's a normal man so obviously power can get in his head and and change him and when he understood that he will try everything to not let something like this happen again. anyway I'm glad my story was just ok for you, I'm new and just write something I think. thanks for your support till now

no this one is right, Wallace in the movie and comic is gay

in the movie it's for Roxie and in the comic it's for Envy

Neil Nordegraf

Envy Adam

Stephen stills

Kim pine

Ramona flowers

Knives Chau

Wallace Wells

Scott pilgrim

Todd Ingram

your too late, no body really cared so i picked her name myself

well I never written something dark so it's obvious I'm not good at it.

yes he could solve it easily with magic or system but that kind of mind control and he hates that, it's not he don't use mind control at some point but he will just do it to read the mind of someone not changing them, he will also heal envy physical and mentally. and MC will eventually pay for his wrong doing by letting envy hit him as much as she wants without defence. the cyberpunk world will just be MC himself and maybe he bring envy with himself, he wont's bring all of them and make a mercenary group, What's the point in that, he will just go there and do what he needs to do and copy a lot of technology and later he will bring his friends to that world for fun but not now.

yes he could just mind control her eventually using system or something else but he hates mind controlling and as I said he's not a good guy. it was wrong but he will learn that was unnecessary. i think calling him monster is a lot, sure he's a bad guy but he will pay for his wrong doing and he also don't go around killing people, even though killing people will give him exp, maybe exp of a normal person be low but with killing hundreds he could level up so he's sort of a bad guy but he's not a monster, believe if he was the story would have so much dark part