You're welcome to be as excited about this as you want, but it has a good way to go if you really want to call it a masterpiece. The english is rudimentary at best, explanations are much longer than they need to be (that means the same could be written more concisely, not that I want less details), the stakes have almost been entirely removed through the rebirth system, Legion (800,000 years of age) bickers among themselves like children, and they haven't had any significant setbacks in ages. I appreciate the scheming, but no matter how well they plan, things are prone to fail. Especially if you plot against beings beyond even your comprehension. Facing hardly any to no repercussions in such scenarios is totally unrealistic in my opinion and a huge waste if there are 9 clones that could theoretically die once in a while to reinforce how truly dangerous living in this cutthroat world is even for the protagonist. And no, I'm not talking about the dying where they reappear 2 minutes later as an exact copy. The story began with almost infinite potential but I'm saddened to report that little of it has been utilized as of yet. Also, considering the inexperience of the writer, one would expect (or at least hope for) improvements but despite it being 2 years and over 1300 chapters, the quality has not improved. In fact, an argument could be made that the opposite is the case...

So, how does it work? This only says that the hair is invisible to them because they can't see it ^^ That's not an explanation

Yes, it always messes up my linebreaks too... no idea why anyone thought that's a good idea ^^

thank you very much :)

Here is the other paragraph to the inconsistency I struggle with. I've explained it in detail before, but just as a short breakdown. The son of sages shouldn't be able to prevent any memory transfer because he kills them after they resurrect (= build a new body/recover soul) while the memory transfer happens even when they're still only a soul fragment (as seen in case of the Stone Skin Race junior) Now, the other option is that, he does, in fact, kill them immediately as a soul fragment but then I have to wonder why he's not killing most Origin Gods permanently with that move? It was said that Origin Gods don't cut off more than one soul fragment from their main soul because they would feel constant pain that affects their fighting prowess otherwise. As before, clarification much appreciated.

This indirectly says that the memory transfer happens directly, even when the resurrecting Origin God is only a soul fragment. The ability of the son of legends seemingly contradicts this, however; by relying on the principle that his fate attack kills Origin Gods a second time around after they resurrect and before their Soul Matrix updates. So, if the memory transfer does indeed only work once an Origin God has regained a body, what happened with the Stone Skin Race junior? And if the transfer is instantaneous, then shouldn't the technique of the son of legends be pointless because their Soul Matrix updates long before they resurrect = he kills them again? Clarification much appreciated, thanks in advance.

What does a 'largely unawakened' bloodline mean? Do you have access to more ancestral memories the more awakened it is? And does it have an effect on affinies? = the more awakened the higher tiered the affinity?

Your continuous efforts are astounding

Now that's a much bigger claim but sadly one I can't refute. One can only hope for the best. But for now, I'll just have to wait and see whether he improves first or I grow tired of waiting and end up dropping it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

The direct messages from the author to the readers are "author notes". And considering that they're only questions about theories and milestones, I find that they unnecessarily break the immersion.

I feel your pain ^^

That is if you ignore Legion's mental age later on but you'll get to that

Anyone else of the opinion that the author notes' sole use is to destroy the immersion?

I wish the author was as eloquent as you....

What kind of an answer is this? If I'm wrong, then tell me why...

It says that the path of divinity diverges from the path of perfection but it was never on it. A Transcendent is still part of the body/soul path, so you never deviate from it to begin with. And what has never left cannot return. It's just an alternative that ends with a bottleneck, isn't it?

Does Supreme Race actually refer to races without stat limits in this case or should this rather be Divine Races (with a powerful Divine Ability) or Royal Races (who have produced an Origin God)

@DMadLord How come it returns? You become a Transcendent (Path of Body/Soul) and then become a God (Path of Divinity/Godhood). At what point have you been on the Path of Perfection to 'return' to it as an Origin God?

You don't think so? So Tssandulighafan shouldn't be referred to as Tsu? Or Dylganihl as Dill? (that's a spice in german btw.)

I can somewhat understand this in case of Tssandulighafan but be honest....if that's not a great dragon name then I don't know what is. It takes some getting used to but in doubt, you can just call him Tsun later on. Btw. there will be a much much much worse name that I can guarantee you'll only read once EVER ^^ As for Gehaldirah, or Gehald for short...that doesn't sound difficult at all. I think that's the perfect middling between not too human but also not difficult.