KingGeorgeUK

I really liked this story it was great one of my favourite story's and even though their is some bits and pieces i am not a fan of the overall fic was great Keep it up

Like this so far I hope this will be as good as the others you are definitely getting better with the story development and I like to see where you are going with this

Not my favourite but still good enough story overall although I think it could have done with a bit more personal development overall i still believe that marvel is not a great place to be as it is so complex that there can be so much to navigate

Quick ending but very well done overall but still a great story keep up the good work I will be working my way throught the others harry potter first and now this can't wait to start the next one

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One of the best story's I have read while there was some repetition in the writing I hope you do another story but with Harry being a royal wizard or spying on the wizarding world mi5 or with a mix over of being a kid and helping law enforcement like ncis as a teen consultant that could be interesting and funny

Good chapter keep it up sometimes I do wonder what the ending would come to if you take the time to think about it but I really just want to keep reading and the quality is still good Maybe not as long but if you take a day or two instead of 1 hour it will probably help

Read this before with a different name are you copying there work and just renaming it[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry] I can't think of what it's called at the moment

Good luck with your studies and I hope you will not forget about this once your are done with your exams this fanfiction is a masterpiece waiting for its finale[img=update]

Loving this hope you keep updating I really want to see the starks kick everyone around. And I can't wait to see everyone's reaction and realising that they can't do anything about it