Sumit_Indi

nah man. it had good potential but it became another Chinese novel with those cringe mc with cringe stories pretty quick

it was good until chapter 69 where mc allowed to have someone else's nickname to be written on his Women's breasts. which is technically quite disgusting, considering how possesive mc is towards his women he should not allow that to happen. If author goes with such cuck setting them I am out

only thing that could describe this novel is tortures! like insanely shit. first MC is idiotic on whole another level next author makes his mother in cold emotionless b*tch who can't turn into a being with emotions like love and yep mc still cares about shitty clan of his considering how his mother treated him, he should not be that attached to it. the execution of story is horrible, like seriously more than 200 chapters and mc is still not adult. it doesn't make sense to give ability powerful enough to bend fate according to one's will to a human being such as MC's mother as the ability to bend fate is too powerful for human. and this novel is mix of Chinese and Japanese shit. I forgot many times that I was reading Japanese style novel with Chinese coustom mixed to unbelievable point. lastly don't give mc such strong powers if you don't even know how to implant them in way readers will be able to make sense of story and plot you are writing with big plot holes. enough to get you haters from another places far from you in this world

kinda big let down if I have to say mc is just meh like he doesn't take s*x seriously at all like common bro 25 chapters and he is still virgin not to mention useless chapters like 'sleep' and 'morning' which are completely useless.

it could have been really good read if author didn't have personal vendetta against pulsar girl like author literally tortured her to the point even I feel it is unjustified. like mc could have forgiven her easily after all this time but author has to include some incomprehensible shit where the girl had to listen to voices of f*king that literally just made me lose all interest in this novel like who even likes a novel where author is like torturing a character like she killed their whole family 1000 times.

'lowkey peak' is all I can say insanely good novel just keep going author.

nothing worth mentioning here it's just mid at best and the pace is shit unbelievably shit. I must say reading 7 even 7 chapters was like torture.

btw I already read 227 chapters

sorry author but the romance scenes seems too forced not to mention mc blaming himself and acting cold and all to Maya is just stupid cuz she was with him at his lowest yet he still chose something that doesn't make sense at all when he was with T. he gave her support like he knew what to do at that point yet when Maya was infront of him who deserves him more than T. yet you making it feel forced choice is just stupid