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This book definitely has potential! However, to unleash it in the right manner is the challenge! Perfectly written. Very creative! However, use advanced vocabulary and grammar to unleash it's creativeness!
The book is great! However, it can be made more interesting with the use of advance grammer. It's a good read though! Good job and keep writing!