systemwriterK

i thought you would give a good twist to the time and space but it s really not interesting x) and anytime there is dragon stuff it's really fucking the story. the characters, there is a good try to make them look more than just names on a story. but they seem too childish xD the mc train for 138 year without change in personnality that s great! lol this guy really like to suffer i guess. i mean bro imagine yourself at his place. better not using it than using it, right ;) it a better to send a clone or retrieve the mastery of a skill as a memory or something. it just feels too unreal. i hope that helps good luck writing

learn french then. if english is difficult. chinese is even more anyway. english is the easiest language to learn. only illiterate people can t learn it

bro do transmigration intead of birthing a new body it s disgusting :( hope you can adjust next time.

null . franchement le mc eclater lalalal

thia type of 'comedy' is really bad. the title stuff is irritating

read 120 chap clearly ia made if not i m sorry but it really look like one there is a system that doesn t even make an appearance at the start. ia can t write systems novels. people are so 2D even the mc feels lacking. so strong that the mc could build a better school himself instead of buying useless stuff unless author can t even comprehend what having read trillions of books and understanding magic beyond god level. it would take one minute to recreate the school. the thing he do feels really lacking and not really explain in depth saying iron gold diamond without making readers understand the strength of each category. so sorry based on 120 chapters i really feel it s ia. a human can t write that badly. ia has a tendancy to implement people groups etc with a side story to introduce them. just being superficial about everything it write like a sketch without colors. this book lack color that i feel. 200 chap it s maybe too late to improve but i hope you will write your next book yourself.

clearly a copy from a mtl i read just changed the names

really bad, and just 17 free chap? with how it s written can t you skip to the moment kids are born atcleast? so boring

i tried the cheat is not that op, lot of time skips. story not interesting maybe good for married couples who wants some fantasy but really bad. it doesn't feel enticing. at least personnaly

really hate this guy so annoying way of talking and the system is useless really don t get it