Starkiller_Revan

Then why did he talk to the police officer in the armory about upgrading his revolver?

I appreciate you trying to clear up any confusion/misunderstandings. I’ll give it another shot and redo my review if I end up changing my mind, but during my first time reading the “guide” sure seemed to fill the exact same role as a sentient system would in any other fic.

Being able to travel essentially anywhere is kind of the whole point of the portals, maybe something like an increased casting time could help limit the portals combat effectiveness without destroying their main purpose?

Not having the ability to travel between dimensions with the portals kind of makes all of the sorcerers completely useless though. How is the Ancient One or any other sorcerer supposed to combat dimensional threats if they are incapable of reaching them?

Sight is definitely not a limitation of those portals considering they can be used to travel between planets/dimensions.

He should get those reforged into armor when he’s fully grown

Bane’s blood is green in the clone wars episode where he has to pretend to be a clone

This is an exact copy of “The Empire of New Valyria” which is already completed with 40 chapters. The supposed “author” just straight up copy and pasted it while claiming it as their own. They even have the nerve to advertise their own patreon like they deserve some kind of payment for blatantly stealing an actual author’s hard work.

It’s honestly pretty funny and disappointing how your argument is essentially “no, you’re stupid! shut up, you’re wrong!” before you fall back on a few basic insults. I’m only responding to you because you keep responding to me. It sure seems like your feelings are genuinely hurt by having someone simply disagree with you.