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It's a cliche plot. But it's surprisingly good although I've just read about first ten chapters. But the other side characters seem to lack some substances. But aside from that, I like that the MC is not acting too complacent or lustful like in usual story with cliché tropes. Although he received a very strong skill, he still preferred his peaceful life. I can only say one thing for this kind of MC, "lucky bastard!" Good luck, author! :)

Thank you for your suggestion! Please stay tune to follow Arthur's journey closely :)

Maybe you can take references from other novels. Observe how each author portray different characters. You can also observe their writing styles. Don't be too focused on the world building and story plot. The interactions between the characters and their emotional input in different situations are also important to make the readers engrossed in the story. Break a leg!

Hello! Another greetings from the author. Now then, I think that maybe some of the readers are quite confused with the countries mentioned in this story and their geographical positions. And so, I attached a prototype of the Map of Eos in this review. Although because it is a prototype, there might still be some names that haven't or need to be changed later. For example, Andalus have been changed to Eandalus. I'll also keep note and post a reply when changing the names written on the map. Thank you very much! May you have a fun time reading :)

Thanks a lot! :)

Well then. To tell the truth, this story was surprisingly good. It has a potential from its premise. The pace is not too fast either. Now the lacking part is the execution of the idea. If I can say, the narrative is lacking in description and too casual. You need to put a difference between the narratives and dialogues to make the story more beautiful. As for the characters, well, honestly, I can't find anything to make them stand out and they also seem to lack emotions. Perhaps you can develop the characters more to make them more charming and interesting. Wishing you a pleasant journey :)

Now then, where should I start first? In fact, I haven't read any xianxia novels in the last few months. S in the beginning, I need to recall how the cultivation world work first. Honestly, I think the story is quite good. But maybe you can add a little more description to your narratives. I also have quite a confusion in differentiating between the narratives and Ba Yihan's thought. How about you also give each character some kind of trait that only each of them has? It will give some kind of unique vibes that stand out from others. Overall, although the genre of BL is personally not my usual cup of tea, I've a good time enjoying it. Wish you the best on your journey :)

Thank you :) Hope you witness our journey in this story.

Thank you very much for your review. I will ensure to give a better quality for the next chapters ;)

Thank you! Wish you all the best too :)