Sri2k

Please use an online editor. Current writing looks weird

Hi, a lot of chapters are out of order. Please fix this. Thanks

Zagreb

Should be coach/manager

Could have been an excellent novel if not for the Chinese propaganda.

About 184 cm on chapter 630

The brand rose too quickly. Honestly, a bit too fast paced

Lines are a bit too repetitive in the initial chapters

Although I like the story, the repeated bowing and courtesies is getting on my nerves.

Chaotic but feels like reading a Deadpool script. Great job