Great_Immortal

Naruto: I was just like you I understand you... bla... bla... Snake: I want to be the Hokage too! I will be the first Snake Kage! Naruto: That's the soul! DATTEBAYOO Snake: DATTEBAYOO

Considering the warlike nature of Asgard society, I feel that Odin cannot give a shipload of logistics and military to his inexperienced son, no matter how much he trusts it. Instead, he sends him near an important general to gain experience and prestige (you can create an OC for that), after gaining enough experience, Odin calls him back and assigns him with Thor, who has passed the exam (Thor becomes deputy commander), to midgard during their first mission. They come and fight various antagonists, and as a result they create Scandinavian mythology or another religion. But hey, that's just my opinion. Use your own idea and write the book however you want. After all, the basis of this work is to have fun while writing, otherwise writing becomes torture after a while. If this comment helps you, remember it, but if it does the opposite, just view it as a bad comment and forget about it.

It's pretty good overall, but has some logical flaws. For example, Odin gives an army to someone who has no combat experience, no command prestige, and appoints a random civilian as deputy commander. Personally, I'm not sure that soldiers will necessarily obey someone whose only trait is to be genius; especially if that person is considered a brat by their standards. I think it would have been much better if Odin had appointed him as a deputy commander in the first place and gained experience over time. Apart from this and a few minor points, I liked the book and thank the author for his hard work.

Nice episode! Maybe I should leave a review?