Drako_0692

I didn't have to read several chapters, what an idiot I was.

Well the protagonist is a child who complains about everything and everyone, he can't stand the fact that demons act selfishly and he thinks he is superior to everyone, that is quite embarrassing and well the intelligence of everyone around him will decrease so that the protagonist doesn't I don't look bad.

As the author said, it is his first story and it has the problems of a beginner, it is very flat and very powerful, the mc There is no problem with a character being very powerful but it has to be balanced with a striking personality. and the MC doesn't have that

ok, you gave him 3 skills of a creation god. I hope you can balance this story well.

If you describe your character as handsome and charismatic, then you don't need powers related to sexuality. If you give it to them, it simply speaks to how desperate you are as an author.

There is so much garbage that I didn't need a system to explain it and what makes it very powerful is that it requires a charismatic character so that the story doesn't get boring.

Is the system a joke? Just say you have the power and what else do you need? I seriously hope you don't come up with nonsense that you need to train.

Translation If you realize that these powers are explained as simple fire manipulation, there isn't much difference other than temperatures and techniques.

I read up to chapter 30 of Hay, I couldn't stand the story anymore, if you're going to change the personality then do a rewrite.

The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.