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Yes, i came back to check the comment as soon as i saw his 2nd skill was related to seducing older women. Its never good sign when author starts this bs right from ch2.
tbh, even i dont see a problem. If your acid can melt people DONT spit it at people especially heroes, if it rebound back on you because hero put up shield doesnt mean its hero's fault. Horizon was kind enough to move him so his own acid puddle dont kill him. Also, that cop killer dies 9 time out of 10 by cop hands irl if they dont have bodycam. Even if he survive he'd wish he died when he reach prison and they learn he's a cop killer.
with Nezu's IQ chess would be solved. (google if you dont know what a solved game is)
oh fk!!!!!!!! this is a revelation.
Ngl.... the beginning power picking scene without any limiter and extreme luck attribute really put me off but gotta say author did a good job with what he got the story was interesting to read. Looking forward to his adventures in new universe now.
author have some kind of brain damage. He keep introducing new plot device but never really do anything with it. His cheat is super OP but mc forgets about it for tens of chapters each time and barly even scrach the surface of its power. When he uses its as plotarmor to destroy ongoing plotline, theres also Mc jumping from one story line to another without brain, the whole hidden paradise island arc was unnecessary, and his writing style is frustrating mc always getting bullied left and right but do bare minimum without any satisfying ending. The whole return to konoha arc was the worse xianxia POS i've seen so far.
ps: i'm continuing this convo from other novel coz i dont wanna give that author anymore clot. I get your point buddy, but He still deleted your comment even while you were supporting him because it looked bad on him. I know you can still see the comment from your account but try to check after logging out or incognito and you'll see it been deleted/hidden by author. Anyway, this was my last msg before i permanently logged out. have a great day 🤗