This story has me hooked, like I couldn’t stop reading the moment I started it. The betrayal is real and I felt it through my soul. I recomand reading this story !

anytime 😊

EXCUSE ME.... WHAT??!

The story is great with lots of potential, the story gets better and better which is logical since the writer improves every chapter. the start of the story feels kind of robotic but I truly trust the writer and their potential.

I would have put a comma between “fine” and the rest of that sentence, it reads so much easier.

Thank you on your feedback, I will definitely remember it and give the next chapters a heading like you suggested. I appreciate the time you took to read, comment and review this story!

The story is great, I would suggest rewriting the first (few) chapter(s) but the writing definitely gets better the more chapters you read. The story is interesting and I hope the writer keeps their motivation up as I wish to read more of this story!

This story is truly amazing, from the very first line. I'll be waiting for other chapters to come out. To the autor; keep up the good work!

This story really has me sitting at the edge of my chair, It's an intresting story to say the least. The writing is amazing and really pulls you in like your dreaming instead of reading.

This story is written in an emotional way, the first chapter alone makes you feel the exact same feelings as the main character Emily. It’s written really well and got me wondering what will happen next.

The way this chapter is written makes me really feel the tears in my eyes while ready this, Poor Emily...