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No, he should make a power suit to be a batman beyond, and with spider-man's powers he would become an incomprehensible mixture and without Batman's brains, it's all strange..goblin serum would be even more suitable
Mmm just love it when a story starts with words that Asians(Chinese) being more beautiful than Americans and Europeans..
thx for the chapter
Nice John Wick reference:)
Thx
Well, I think this is the best approach, first decide how you want the story to end, then divide it into arcs and decide on the ending of each arc, and then fill it up :)
So far it's good, the interaction with AI is funny and interesting, it's not boring to read, MC makes his way from the very bottom, and not like another Chinese master who is handed a couple of billion dollars an hour after appearing in the new world, in general I hope for a continuation and that the fic will not be abandoned)
By the way, I was thinking about this chapter, why doesn’t he ask anyone if he’s heard anything about Hitogami? It made particular sense to ask Randolph if he knew who it was, since he had directed him to him. And he would have told him about it.
the problem is that everything is written extremely poorly here, the grammar is terrible, after editing it becomes readable, but before that... even a translator from Chinese to English would have produced something more understandable..