Eminence_TheGreen
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I dont know but I hate that it shows up on my fucking screen every two seconds and that it immediately becomes the story I'm reading when I open the app I haven't even pressed it it just did it, i know it's not your fault author san but Its , I wont give you a bad rating because you did nothing to me
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I am confusion
I'll never let you train again - correction I would correct some other stuff but honestly please proofread before posting your chapters
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hermoine breathe- correction
he just did
i know I can't make you change your story because of how far it is Advanced but this is not how Power Systems work he's in DxD not in katekyu Hitman okay so some random human n***** from DxD cannot use a freaking ability from a different universe that's not how it works he can use it( the mc ) because he has a system a template, this n***** ( the guy asking him to teach him to become stronger) can't just magically learn the freaking ability it's not a DxD related ability it's not like his templates( the mc) immediately changes the entire universe's power structure it's not going to make it so anybody can awaken these powers from other universes that's not how it works if you want something like physical capabilities like say from One Piece like rankyaku that would make sense because it's just physical capabilities it's not actual a supernatural power
so for the past 18 Years n**** just existed like you couldn't do some push-ups some squats something to arm yourself against vampires Niger like you had so much time you know the world that you were in and you did nothing just accepted your fate just just kill yourself but you're useless oh I got a system now so obviously I'm going to become super power and overpowered like n**** you couldn't just work before that so that it would be easier to use the system in the first place or did you never think about that cuz obviously you don't have a family in this world based on what you're saying yeah got to be an orphan or some s*** and if you had family you would be trying to fight or survive in this world getting some meager I'm not that strength so you could kill some people and live.( I'm in the first few paragraphs and I already have a headache how could you be this pathetic it's not like hecdidn't know the world he knew what the world was like)