ConceptualGears
I like chaos in order.i like discipline In chaos. truth be told I like author who makes a fanfic a total chaos cuz that's what makes a fanfic, A FANFIC.
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oh maybe she got married at 35 then it makes sense.
finally a good name. thank god.
shouldn't she be 30 or something if asher aurora twins are 10 and the heroine big sis is few years older author? The age seems over exaggerated or author forgot 47 is too old nowadays. 😂 or the aging is different here on this world?
my same exact thought bro.
non existent spine? then how the heck is he alive, bio mechanic spine ghost. what did you drink before writing this author. 😹😹🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣🤣
For the protagonist? will they be duplicates of the existing people or did he have a seperate list of things he can get.
wow. for some reason the chapter felt complete? is this a cliff hanger anti-addiction of mine or something?
nah maybe he had enough with the people bothering him and sending threats.
boo author. why didn't you cut this sentense. it feels disappointing now👻.
I genuinely admire the author for his increase of skill for his cliff hangers. it's not every day i see someone this talented in cliffhanger. I can only wish you luck.
dragons are as rare as nuts here.
I am not qualified to say that because I didn't have enough knowledge or expertise in the field but i would have gone for the omnipotent "horror" attribute. (basically reality manipulation but specializing in fear) . then it would go well with the abyssal gaze of the mc and all but all my attributed are unconventional and i can see author going the simple elemental route. so it would be disrespectful for the author if i were to criticise him while being me.
water is ok i guess. it's way better than fire , lightning, earth, light, dark, space, time, chaos, shadow, gravity, mass, poison, metal, tungsten, etc attributes that are way too overused than water.
my prediction for the usage of the green substance is turned to be completely wrong. so now the mc is gonna use it on himself and get it's normal value or maybe the author has another plan for this green susbstance.
it's called OCD. but it's OCD in a very small amount. chill dude. every author has a different disciplines or obsessions that are totally normal. it doesn't always for word count. if you have actually seen what authors do to increase in other stories you would be doubting your life choices you understand. besides everything it looks aesthetically cool looking to me. everyone has their own tastes so chill dude ,chill and read to your heart content it will elevate the experience more unlike asking "is this necessary? blah blah" it sounds so disrespectful to the author.
toooooooooo easy.
too simple.