Just don't ruin his character I have seen many author ruin mc character to give them maturity so keep that in mind

Totally agree with author about kaguya full support 🔥🔥

Bro too much gpt

Why not professor and Dumbledore approved

Love your way of thinking it's kinda similar to mine 🔥

Total agree +1

You know this jon is savage 🔥 and best advice make him reborn in house of dragon time period

You know this is the great passing the torch movement some even say the old king have pass his responsibility and authority ( because of dragon) to the new young King (aemon) removing his father from the picture and various other kind of mummer will raise in Kingslanding like how the king chosen his own demise and welcome stranger with open arms with all his grace and pride without any fear in the presence of his grandchildren and his oldest friends. Others like how king and queen dragons have chosen a new king and queen bro best advice try to make the next chapter more legendary as possible 🔥 the king have been fallen long live the king 👑🔥

Truee tell him tell this unfortunately soul that because of greed and Envy many great men have fallen, many great Kingdoms have been destroyed many dynasties have been lost in sand's of time

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Then please make dungeon after few canon event's

It means that did you write it yourself or you simply translate a Chinese fanfiction and posting here

Bro one question it's your original or it's an translation ..???

So This entire fanfic is a .......translation

Now bro please no more dungeon 😭

Totally

You know it's getting boring with all the training and stuff right now I don't even need to read the story to know what is going on just by reading the title I can tell you had a good start but not wasting it with all these useless training and stuff which will not do anything other than power up mc few times and that's it .it will not gonna impact the story so try to get back to the main story which people wanted to read and stop wasting your time in writing all those training and stuff because people will lose interest

Please try to make him a wolf and by wolf I didn't mean the north and their stupid honorable fake Wolf's what I mean is the real wolf ruthless agressive not showing mercy except for few brutal in combat and didn't shy when using dirty combat moves easily back stabbing people for his own goal and for his loved ones

Totally agreed with your theory about founders seriously I don't know how many people just believe that they have a Bank account with goblins 🤦 and with all those FANFICs about being their heir and getting filthy rich instantly but here is the thing I don't think Hogwarts is free I agree the founder might do a great donation and all but I don't think they are running a free NGO so according to me Hogwarts will have a Bank account made by there descendents and first wands are given a subsidised price and Hogwarts get's lot of donations from wizard government that's why many pure blooded family hate muggle born because muggle borns are getting almost free education from their money and then standing against them and forcing there own muggle tradition and culture and destroying orignal wizarding tradition's and culture and also badmouthing their use of blood magic and dark magic like my theory just mention me when use this theory 😁🙏