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Low number of chapters, low speed, this is a disappointment.

What fan fiction did you take as your model?

As a Doma fan, I wanted her to feel more emotions before he died, like excitement and joy.

Tftc

Now that I think about it, the novel's power system is really complete and shows that the author really thought about it and researched it.💯💯

Ning Guofan gave MC a wealth of knowledge about cultivation and the Dao. He couldn't pass on any cultivation techniques to MC along with the rest of his inheritance.🤔

Wow, great, I didn't think you'd explain it so thoroughly. Now I completely understand how the power system works. There was no explanation about the Tianyuan Stone in the novel. If you hadn't said it, I wouldn't have understood. Of course, brother, you forgot. When you rewrote the novel, many of these details were removed in the first chapters. I think a chapter is needed as a prelude. Fortunately, I had read the novel before the rewrite and I remember these details.

I'm saying either the world's power system is too complicated or the MC is too powerful.🤧

I have a few questions. Now, does Su Xiabai still have the ability to swallow weaker bloodlines or did the fusion disappear? Then there's another thing. In cultivation novels, usually their bloodline and blood vessels are the same, but here MC has two types of blood vessels, Yin and Thunder, which can be ignored. But in MC's body cultivation technique, his veins turned into star veins. If I'm not mistaken, the weird part is that MC's race is half-demon, half-human(A person with dragon blood, but her race is half demon, half human.). Another thing is, are their path cultivation realms separate from MC's cultivation technique? Because the powers of MC's body cultivation technique have nothing to do with the world cultivation realm, so it's confusing. I just found out from the explanation that MC's body technique is not even an immortal technique according to the ranking in the information. What's even more confusing is that there is also a cultivation technique called Astral Tyrant, which I don't even remember when it was introduced in the story.

It would have been better if the story was about a person from Earth who is reincarnated as Naruto and immediately after the reincarnation, the armor designed by Naruto is destroyed and her fate becomes like this.