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Darkness able to partially absorb energy and release it back (extending to other types of energy in the future). For example can create a thin sheet of the darkness around the body that absorbs all sound energy, light energy; kinetic energy etc, providing a pseudo stealth. By wrapping yourself or a blade in darkness it can partially absorb and kinetic energy received in the form of hits allowing a stacking of damage that can be released back or momentarily strengthen the darkness. Darkness creates wounds that are harder to heal, a natural counter to the healing flames/light of Nephis. This might be more OP but true darkness making them lose connection to their soul sea / memories / essence temporarily. If the darkness infects them by wounds or is injected etc
can you eventually break strings of fate as well?
I wished i found this when there were more chapters 😭🙏. I'm hooked now
type shii
got some residual trauma from that haha
Author you've doxxed yourself with this line 😂😂
Just a thought if you do have plans for a romance, potentially making it happen further down in the novel. I've read my fair share of transmigrate as a extra / villain novels and I've noticed the plot tends to deteriorate as soon as it happens. Also when it does happen to MC's who have 'bad experiences with people', I find that the writers don't address the fact that because of their previous life of relative solitude there should be hiccups and ups and downs like how it normally is in real life. Please no harems as well haha. I think you've started off well. I also think exploring the MC's distrust and bad experiences with subtly is something you can think to do as well. I find webnovels don't really humanise the experience well. Life isn't just uphill progress, and people tend to relapse easily into their base personality. It takes a long time and active effort to change. Again I find this is also best addressed subtly and with actions instead of descriptions too. Depth to characters is very important to even the choices characters make in stories and the story's subsequent direction. These are just some of my thoughts I've had from being a veteran reader of this subgenre. I wish you well and keep on writing, I definitely see this story doing well especially with more chapters and story progression. Success is a marathon and not a sprint so don't feel pressured and accidentally compromise the quality or pacing you've decided on! Good luck 🙏
This novel is a hidden gem. The themes are well thought out so far. I recommend this to anyone interested. I look forward to how the plot will develop so far since it's quite early in the plot but I believe in the potential. Author I hope you keep on going I definitely see this being a hit if you are able to plan the novel well.
I like the chapters so far. I recommend it based on the quality of chapters and the perceivable potential.
The story is written well so far, I was hooked reading this. All I can say is more chapters pleaseee