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Title ✅ Cover? ✅ Synopsis ✅ I love the story idea as welll, if there is one thing I strongly feel that the author can improve is their paragraphs. They feel too cluttered and it would be great if you can divide the paragraphs short!!

Thanks!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Okay so first of all I love the synopsis and the book concept. How he was betrayed and tortured. Would totally recommend!! Theres magic, prison time, everything[img=gift] Beat of luckk!!!

tysm!!

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Yayy

Thankss

Oh god. I started reading this and could not stop. Amazing character development, interactions, everything! Love the world background, grammar is good toooo Waiting for more chapters [img=In your face]

Thank you so much 😭