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Bruv im sorry but I don’t think I’ll be able to post that mass release, im working on a project and on top of that my laptop keeps switching off.
Okay I’m back home so I’ll start working on the fic again
I haven’t been as free as I thought I would be this December 😭 its been hectic but imma release maybe on the 4th coz I ain’t gonna be around my laptop for a few days
She’s a jinchuruchi
the problem is that I didn't plan out a lot of in depth world building for the lower thousand world that the setting currently is in
maybe, I was thinking the senju would be an ally of the uzumaki in a higher thousand world. I do however need to diversify the abilities of the children of the clan before I do the timeskip so again, maybe
Absolutely love it, amazing story but I will talk about the issues as a critic should.1. the characters around mc sometimes feel like they have been dumbed down to make him look smarter2.Akatsuki members are being recruited while ignoring all the bad shit they have done to warrant the recruitment as a 'good decision'3.mc ain't got no ho*es and so on. however the quality of the story itself overshadows all of that honestly so cudos to you
every fic of yours has a couple people criticising it needlessly, wagwan?So far its pretty good, the subjugation of the gang seemed to be a spur of the moment decision that have no purpose and would likely damage his image. The fact that a woman with good morals and had a following in the gang seemed a tad bit too practical when I read it but what do I know, I haven't gotten far anyway, anyway good luck and don't drop
yeah
technicaly it depends on various factors however, I was trying to set Kauz and Rafi as generals and Fujitora as a commander of the CP0 alone