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How long would you buy time for this trivial arc? Could it even deserve to be called an arc in the first place?
Good flow I suppose, but the grammar needs to improve. Would it hurt you to simply put it in chat gpt for correcting your grammar mistakes?
Can’t wait for more
Could you please skip all the part which is obvious to every reader of jjk, it’s in the plot dude. We came here to reader the fiction you add in, not the story recap
Have you ever reread your own stories, repetition at its finest
Highly recommend grammarly or Chat GPT to get rid of the repetition, it’s so annoying