Sorry for really late reply, I didn't like the idea so I abandoned this one as well cuz it was too reliant on plots of another novel. So I have decided to work on another one from today, one that is original with my own set of ideas and slight characteristic inspirations from RI and Warlock of Magus world. My release schedule is usually 3 -4 chapters per week. I can post them randomly any day or any time, whenever I have time to write it.

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The plot seems interesting. The history portrayed in this shit looks pretty good ngl. Considering that this story lies in our world in an alternate dimension where tech isn't that great and in medival era. I think its a good from a lot of trash isekai I hope to see more good stuff in future

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Feel free to speak about anything you don't like in this novel. After all its kind of like my first novel and I want to improve it. I will be borrowing some elements from other novels but I will try to alter them as much as I can. The cultivation is named rank 1, 2 and so son cuz i get bored making names and pretty sure no one is gonna remember those goofy ass names such as divine eternal emperor heavenly monarch human leading spirit building foundation of sky divine and heaven making realm. Seems plain bs to me

Imagine if it was the end It would be cringe fr

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The basic info is in first chapter, however some other infos will be in novel as well once du shen reaches somewhat higher level of cultivation

I would love to get some suggestions from you guys on how you would like to see our mc improve and do stuff. This is my first novel so it may have some mistakes and will have a good read. Every comment you post or review you give will be seen by me and I will try to improve my novel to the best of my abilities I will try to update this novel one - three chapters per week but depends.