Stormsdarkangel

It would make you the kind that found his fated mate. 🙄

Umm, hello?! Why would it be a joke? More like the Moon goddess is trying to save you from making a huge mistake. You should be thanking her for your mate showing up before you married a chosen(aka forced) mate. Engagements, easy to break off. Most wolves revere the mate bond.

But Jorge was already told to leave and not come back when she was in the old room. These paragraphs make it read like that never happened.

Anyone else notice that Marcy’s Beta husband is missing? Not mentioned once since he got caught cheating! Lol.

Glowing some sort of Vegas? What??!

Right?! Way to not know what’s going on.

AMY. her name is not ARMY

90 chapters into this book and it’s good so far. Developing war, love and rivalries are intriguing. Good world building, solid plot and players. Very few grammatical and spelling errors, especially compared to other novels on apps. Characters and their growth is well done. Can’t wait to read the rest of the story. Nervous of other reviews that mention a poor ending, cliffhangers or no conclusion to the end of the story.

So little editing, so many errors. Grammatical and typos like Ling Vials instead King Vilas and referring to the same character as cousin one minute and sister the next make the story confusing. The plot and world building is decent, the characters are solid. I’m interested and want to read to the end. But to spend more coins on something so frustratingly unedited seems like a waste of money. If it was free for a weekend I would read it all.