Making this review after finishing the 7th chapter er and honestly I’m impressed :) the Author knows how to captivate an audience from the start and I’m interesting in seeing where the story leads us to

Great first chapter :) I would recommend splitting the opening paragraph into smaller ones

Wonderful is all I can say! My review might be impacted by the fact that I know the author personally but I will still be shameless with it! I’m making this review after the 11th chapter and all I can say is wow! The author has managed to fit a summary of the world, power system, introduce important figures and even create an important event without it feelings jumbled up! I already love the mc and there are certain characters I can’t wait to see more of. The author’s writing quality is also superb and I’ve learnt a bit from him just by reading. All in all I definitely recommend this read, worth the 5 stars[img=Good night]

Chenai kinda sus ngl

Correction : “Sure” is missing here

Correction : Arena

Correction : I assume it’s supposed to be that he is “Not” interested, and make it magnetic presence of the “Young man” not “Boy”

Correction : there is a double “The” here

Correction needed : two typos here for beautiful and the

I already have some plans for that ;)

Thank you , thank you. Cuttlefish infected me with hyper realism :) also the first main arc of the story is about to start, looking forward to enjoying it with you!

I probably should since I read through everything myself

Thank cf bro😭🙏🏾

He will meet them again soon :)

This is how their interactions usually are

This chapter hides a lot of details that will later be explored in the story! I tried to make it as less confusing as possible :)

Thank you so much for reading :)

I’ll edit it right now

The next chapter explains its origin story!

Lars is just there to annoy Elias honestly lol