AtlasMagellan

Star rail reference. Nice!

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pretty sure Da Ji look like tamamo no mae. It was said by a tamamo that one of the tail of of Amaterasu(nasuverse) became Da ji

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I like the concept, but the execution is terrible. Way to much over explaining. Lots of sentences can be a lot shorter, and character sentence structure is very badly balanced

My eyes, so many errors. You should use grammarly it helps a lot. I don't have keen eyes for it ,but i've noticed so many of them it's kind of embarrassing

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Good luck

Definitely has potential. Like the fact he didnt just take a template of a extremely popular character/ iconic character or else it would have been very tiresome real fast

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