Despite not having read this novel, I’d like to point out that this isn’t a translation. You can tell because the author has a profile which you can view. Translated works don’t have such a feature.

How would she leave deep trails if she doesn’t have the power to even make a dent in the material used to construct this place?

Off is used for vertical movement, ie chucked off a building, while the two above represent horizontal movement, as you probably intended for

Thrown away* Or Thrown back*

Especially in a cultivation novel!

Is that a bad thing though?

Bah! Davis has gone lower before and remained awake.

For anyone wondering about cup sizes, I use this as a reference even if it isn’t accurate to real life sizes.

First of all, it’s a drone, poison won’t do much. Secondly, she’s low on stamina, she can’t get very far or else risk fainting from exhaustion or something.

Yeah but my thoughts are if she doesn’t eat it, then she can eat it after to become immediately stronger by improving her skills levels

Zenova need be careful else she will die.

That was* sleeping

Speaking of, doesn’t she have that star flower from those black boxes? Is she going to eat that before or after she evolves? Personally I think it would be better if she ate it afterwards since it says that it will upgrade any and all start skills (if I remember correctly and she hasn’t eaten it yet) that way, Shen she evolves and gains more star skills, she can eat it and make them stronger.

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try to do better in the future, but if you have any tips on how I can improve, that would be great appreciated!

It’s no use, it’s not a magic fridge

All good. You’ll probably find more of such instances in the future, so check just in case before you say something in future.

Just found that skeptic is American while sceptic is British. And I am British,

Ah yes, thank you