Aayush_storms
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Aayush_storms1dKommentiertCh 66 Too Far For Murano To Think About!!- Aayush_storms1dKommentiert
Thanks for the chapter but it feels like you forgot about system I mean why is he not using godspeed and how is he tired with all those recovery pills he should be able to score a hatrick by himself by now it feels like you are lowering his skills to make it other players shine which is not bad but this is a fanfic and we have already watched original for character development of other players.
Ch 65 This Is Why He's Itoshi Sae's Brother - Aayush_storms1dAntwortet auf zuzuwuCh 64 There's still more to do
- Aayush_storms2dAntwortet auf LucifferoCh 64 There's still more to do
- Aayush_storms2dKommentiertCh 77 Warmth
- Aayush_storms2dKommentiertCh 64 There's still more to do
- Aayush_storms13dAntwortet auf UnknownMasterCh 19 C19 A MOMENT WITH NEBULA
- Aayush_storms14dKommentiertCh 19 C19 A MOMENT WITH NEBULA
- Aayush_storms14dKommentiert
oc?
Ron, instead of answering, took a moment to assess his new condition. His body felt different, unfamiliar. Gone were the muscles and strength he had honed through years of adrenaline-fueled pursuits. Instead, he found himself in a much weaker, slimmer frame. He looked down at his clothes—school uniform, slightly tattered—and noticed a name tag sewn onto the coat: "Kim Jin-soo." - Aayush_storms17dKommentiert
oof
Word Count chapter - Aayush_storms19dKommentiertCh 239 Chapter 239: Halloween (3)
- Aayush_storms21dKommentiertCh 20 20: Ten Rings
- Aayush_storms21dKommentiertCh 103 Chapter 103: To Achieve Victory