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NOT THE REAL AUTHOR!!! HE'S STEALING CHAPTERS FROM REAPERSCANS!! THERE'S NO OFFICIAL ENGLISH TRANSLATION OF THIS NOVEL. WRITING ANT IS KOREAN!!

This is not the original Author. Writing ant is korean. This guy is stealing content. There's no official English translation of this novel. Hes getting chapters from reaperscans.

You said Zephyr doesn't understand the language, but he heard and understand the woman saying ''well take care you".

The story is good but there's so many downside. *The author always explain unnecessary things. Everything the MC do, he will explain it. Like come on man let your readers read and do the thinking. *The MCs personality, attitude is not consistent. *The author always target his/her audience. Like he wants to fight them all the time. *The author is smart but he always force some things in the plot. *The author is confused. ADVICE: *Be consistent author. Your doing good. Don't force somethings. Let the story playout. *Read the Reincarnated Assassin is a Genius Swordsman. Get some writing techniques and add it to your style.

Hello the Power rank system is confusing!!!! What is a rank? To rank? Hero rank? Not rank? What is this? Check the screenshot of kevin and ren talking about them ranking up if they eat the sky grass.

The only problem i have is the writing style. Like come on, it's hard to read something repetitive like the way you describe Alex/shang in everything that he do. Example: Alex open his eye. Alex slowly sat up on his branch. Alex move his muscle. Alex alex and alex and shit! It's hard to read. You should use he.