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Also killing of every capable fighter is the very definition of stupid, no matter how you plan on bringing them back. You did this all to make him pissed at the overseers. The next episode will determine whether this novels goes to the trash heap or not.
yeah, you see, I hope I'm wrong but doubtful. Next up Almond destroys the other worlds, then he goes back to second layer, gets new friends, holowstar and some nobles kill them, finds that some overseers back them, goes to layer 3 and we get a repeat. At the end he goes after the tree.
based on your new book I'd say the ending will be far from satisfactory. And I'm not sure how you can justify killing of all the major characters and bringing some back as spirits.
Really? That is stupid imo
If Earth loses I'm going to be really disappointed.
I'm quite sure there are stronger monsters out there and the monsters reproduce faster than humans get new phantoms, especially since phantoms often get killed.
Also, i know what you are thinking, but no having to go through this everytime they get stronger is not good even if in your opinion it goes to the story. Repeated story lines ruin novels, it gets old quickly. You can accept my advice or not, it's your story and your choice. I sincerely hope that this does not become another novel where i have to skip a ton of chapters or even drop the entire novel, because stuff just gets repeated with small changes.
It's the same thing you already did 2 or 3 times before, it's getting old. We don't need a constant repeat. There should be enough material to avoid repeating things, we don't need 5 or more chapters every arc of fights between Klaus and co.
Really? You just had to pull out this shit again. Those stupid battles between them you are making are getting more and more boring each time. Please stop repeating shit or this novel will only go down.
It's his fault too, he had enough time to read up on the monsters, but like usual he did not. He knows that he still lacks even common knowledge that other phantoms have, but he does 0 to fix it.