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It's fascinating and I recommend giving it a try! ... ... .. ... ... ... .. Ciao Adios . .. ... .... ..... ...... ...... ......... ....... ....... ...... ........ ........ ........ ....... ....... ......... .......... ........
Premise is good but execution lacks depth and comes off as cringe and childish uk that of a egoistical maniac who tries to act badass but comes off kinda stupid, all in all- it's definitely worth a try, but it just didn't suit my taste. Oh yeah im a legitimate RI prick! Great Love Immortal Venerable~!
I think there's nothing wrong with introducing English tbh and let's be clear here he's no mad genius and if we go as per he say then in the future we'll be isolated cuz c'mon bro English has become a common language for a reason. It's foolish of you to accuse him as he's doing what he can to help and atleast with English he has a comprehensive way to develop the education system to our likings
I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward- I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking. It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor. I've read another Indian novel- (India that could be by Maddymudda) So I had great expectations! Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.