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good novel, there are some grammar problem starting at chapter 30 but overall it is still good. nonetheless starting from chapter 115 it is another novel so we expect the author to review his work

iIfind it strange to end this book after only 11 chapters but iIwill still try it

the story by itself is good but there is a problem : this book is a copy of my dungeon life : rise of the slave harem. that book has more than a thousand chapter and you didn't even try to change the name of the character. At least mark the name of the author and explain that it is not your original story

good story this far, with some problem nonetheless . some names are just dropped and there was a change in the perspective at some point, at the first it was the mc who was narrating and now it is a 3rd person point of view

the story so far is quite good i expect the autor will keep the pace

Omae wa …..

Wasn’t It ben Beckman ?

You will stop loving It soon

It is true that he was kicked out but he at least fight outside and didn’t just stay passive

Lineage ?