MiyoIyo

must portecc

Ascendant struggle will get you hook and immerse into its militaristic powersuit(?) warfare right of the start with its high octane action scene. Author holds just enough information near them to keep the reader wanting more of its worldbuilding while at the same revealing just enough to feed the curiosity appetite. Characters(so far) have their own motivations why they are in the fray, which made me attach to them. The prose is good, however, could work more on dialogue. It sometimes confusing on who talking to who during rapid exchange. Adding actions in between could be the solution. Its a solid 4.8

Frame's arm. The powersuit.

The prologue is action packed with information being told to answer the reason of why its happening, while at the same time holding some to intrigue the readers. Its a good story with huge potential in my opinion.

Hooked on this chapter

NP king, the ending portray the cunning nature of his enemies without any exaggeration and being pushover! its a page turner I must say

Man the last part is 10/10 king, don't let them discourage you! Setbacks makes compelling stories and believable MC on a fantasy world!