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En_Kirito

En_Kirito

Lv3
2022-11-07 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito5mth
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    Membengongkan

    Matahari begitu teriknya seperti api. Panas matahari yang membara dari langit memaksa air di tanah menguap. Pohon willow melayu, dan jarangnya dedaunan membuat pohon-pohon itu terlihat sedang sakit.
    Penguasa yang Agung
    Ost · Heavenly Silkworm Potato
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito9mth
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    Gada tanda baca anjir, lalu dialog dan narasi gk dipisah-pisah, rangkain kalimat juga harus dipisah-pisah biar bisa dibaca.(Harus direvisi)

    Ch 1 chapter 1
    Jitsuwa hontō no jibun o wasurete shimatta hito
    Aktion · Kazuki_21
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito10mth
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    You can give advice in any form

    Ch 1 Huang Xuan
    The World Writer
    Fantasie · En_Kirito
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito11mth
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    Op

    Ch 1601 Menghancurkan Jari Seluruh Langit!
    Aku Harus Menyegel Langit
    Ost · Er Gen
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito11mth
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    he dont dare do it alone and only depend on circle

    When Yulia was thinking about the bad luck that befell her suddenly the bell rang signaling that school was over, Yulia who heard it immediately became excited again because she wanted to go home as soon as possible. You must be wondering why Yulia wants to go home immediately when she even hates home so much. The answer is that Yulia likes playing virtual reality games which are on the rise lately. She can let go of all the sadness and do whatever she wants.
    Strongest female leader
    Fantasie · Tasiya_Putri
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito1yr
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    check-in

    "Yes! I finally managed to obtain it!" 
    Divine Emperor of Death
    Ost · Stardust_Breaker
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito1yr
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    chapternya blm jadi, harus di tambah lagi, dan harus di revisi juga,

    Ch 1 bab. 1 - buku aneh
    Aku Sebenarnya Dewa Dari Para Dewa?
    Fantasie · En_Kirito
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito1yr
    Verschickt

    karena ini novel buatan saya sendiri, jadi saya kasih 5 bintang, hahaha...🗿

    Raja Roh Yang terlalu kuat
    Fantasie · En_Kirito
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito1yr
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    semoga bisa dipahami

    Ch 2 chapter 2
    Raja Roh Yang terlalu kuat
    Fantasie · En_Kirito
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  • En_Kirito
    En_Kirito1yr
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    baru belajar bikin novel

    Ch 1 chapter 1
    Raja Roh Yang terlalu kuat
    Fantasie · En_Kirito
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