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This seems like an interesting story so far. I’ll be waiting for more updates on this.

Have you tried removing past quest assets in the settings part?

It’s been a fun read so far. I see a lot of crossover characters from different stories though which gives me both excitement and concern since the stories I’ve read where that occurs usually don’t end well. I have high hopes you can keep the good work!

I came here looking to read about Big Bang Theory, or in this case young Sheldon, but stayed because of the Dr. House chapters.

I like the songs but I think you’re slowly losing out on the modern family aspect of your story in favor of song reactions. I’ll continue to read the story though

Well this seems like a fun story concept. I look forward to reading more in the future.

Seems similar to other stories starting out but, instead of a novel or comic, you have a store. It’s easy to read but can’t say much more than that since there’s only one chapter right now. It does seem promising though and look forwar to reading future updates.

Might just be me but I’m getting Doncic vibes from Furihata. Not the fastest guy but beats people with passes and good shooting and finishing.

I like the way you make the commentaries and conversations since it reads well and doesn’t feel forced. I look forward to reading more chapters in the future.

I’m all caught up with this story now. It’s been an interesting read so far. Grammar-wise it has some errors here and there that makes it a bit confusing but it becomes clearer if you consider the context of the sentence. It’s not a bad translation better than most even but there is still room for improvement. Personally, I’m wondering about the direction of the story. If it will end with Liyue or involve nations like Inazuma and Sumeru in the future.