Adriana7885

I really hate hermione. I hope she gets a reality check soon enough

I’m disappointed she didn’t leave that class bc she suck’s at divination 😞I hate her attitude of miss know it all

If your expecting a smart mc then this ain’t it. I love the writing but it’s pretty cringe in the stuff he says and his actions portray him as another Naruto and somehow all the other characters immediately after meeting him already consider him as family while they’re in war and he’s a slytherin? It just seemed unrealistic. I had to drop since he didn’t save some people

Bro imma have to drop because I love the prewett twins like I wanted him to save them ☹️☹️ they didn’t deserve what happened 😒 the way they did in cannon is tragic af

Your writing is pretty good, can’t wait for updates!

I don’t like his attitude towards females 😭 I mean I also didn’t like crossovers, the writings good but just ugh I didn’t even like that he was raising that cat and still had thoughts like no way

I personally didn’t like how frequent they were but that might just be me, other people likely don’t mind em

This was funny 😂 can’t wait for updates!

I really loved it but unfortunately I believe it’s been dropped

Well first off I believe hermione might be the love interest, second for some reason Neville longbottom lives in the leaky cauldron with his grandma and is poor. Also dumbledore went all the way to America and took Jake but he didn’t find any of his actions suspicious like how he had the key to his vault or wouldn’t tell him he’s the descendant of Merlin. I also noticed the #R18 so I’m just hoping it’s not a harem. The mc also behaved like deku from mha … (hes not the brightest) Personally it’s not my cup of tea so I will have to drop since I found it to be pretty cringe