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I think you mean Jaya Island. At least that is what is called in English.

I really enjoy reading this story, but one thing i would love to see more of is inventions. I really enjoy when he comes up with "new" ideas and inventions. Keep up to great writing!

I am really enjoying this story, its rare to find a supernatural story that does´t devolve into romance and such. I would recommend this story for anyone that likes supernatural. The characters are cool and the story is unique, the author does a great job on crafting alternate universe.

Great chapter, even better story. Keep it up because i am loving it!

Now this is a fanfiction i can get behind, a no-harem story so rare to find. Keep up the great work! looking forward to read the rest of the story if it keep this quality i am very happy!

What strawhats? i thought they were called dream team. Story has been fun to read so far. a few mistakes here and there but wonderful work keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed reading this story, you have captured my interest. Looking forward to read mkr3!

Cool story, for me personally there is a bit much Comedy. This story so far has´t taken itself to seriously and it makes it hard for me to get into it. You have done a great job writing it and its a cool premise. Good luck and I wish you the best!

Deepseek is that you? :D

Would be better to first use the devil fruit then take the pill 💊?