Tom_Grad

Man, I am only on chapter 1 and I already like this but I'm only giving 3.4 stars because you seem to have dropped it so I think it would be disingenuous to rate it high while you seem to have given up on it hope that you're not offended. I appreciate that you've actually put some respect on the will of fire many fanfics love to portray it as hiruzen brainwashing kids which is bullshit. Imagine sh*tting on a person's ideal for no reason. Hiruzen,Hashirama and Tobimara willingly sacrificed themselves so that the future could be secure for the next generation and when I see fanfic authors distort this truth as a form of brainwashing it just annoys me to no end.

I'm sort of sad your fanfiction was really great I was hoping that you could finish it. Good luck to your future endeavors though.

Author I loved your novel it was so good lol if you have any other novels in the future please don6forget to update us.

This is from me but I hate when authors don't specify when their stories have R18 stuff I like my story free of lemons I don't give a fuck that he asked for a blowjob I would have just have kill her off and the story really doesn't make sense Minato is so out of character and the MC is just crazy it's all over the place I can not read anymore it might have gotten better but I'm sorry I lost patience. Good luck on your endeavours though author because I see many people like this but it just ain't for me.

Hey do you have any recommendations with reincarnated as doctor strange with at least 40 chapters because I've found none most of them are like 5-10 chapters ohh please no harem and lemons if you can romance is fine but it shouldn't be the focus.

Well that's really sad I really liked your novel though I was sort of upset of how you misrepresent Hiruzen but I get you he was really too soft on his friends. Well wish you the best I wish I could have read the whole novel it really help me during this time that I was sick. God bless