khalil_r

I'm so glad you like it! Seeing beginners like you start writing really inspires me to work on my own story someday. Keep it up

I created this cover for your story and tried to make it as cool as possible. I really hope you like it—let me know what you think, and keep your good work

I created this cover for your novel! Hope it complements your work well. Looking forward to reading it and sharing a review. Keep up the great work!

Damn, I thought I could continue reading despite its badness in all aspects. Until now, there is a childish hero, despite his old age, and characters who are out of place, like all professors who are still brainless, fighting with children and an ill-considered system of power. It was mentioned in the novel that a daughter No one was able to cure the Marquise, even those who graduated from the academies. So how could the hero heal her, even though he is not that genius and his relatively young age? What made matters worse was the logic of the hero, who was dishonest, meaning he deprived two children from their family, who were his brothers and the real sons of the family, because he did not love them. Let us say that he did not love the elder. But Tryon spoke differently and did all this when he was close to forty, meaning he was intellectually mature. Damn, all this plus the logic of fake magic and real magic. If magicians were this stupid, couldn’t they know something so simple, and this hero knew it in a few chapters, then this is illogical.

i guess the second chose is the best

the question that will force every man to think for hours

some ppl will chose that

I liked the start but we didnt have informations to know what happening but the prolog was fire keep going ☕

Keep up the good work and dedication to the next level