Once more, another perfect blend of popular tropes and cultures. It really ties it all together quite well. Not to mention your wording and original terminology really make me excited to see more of what this story has to offer. Excited to finish it all!

Reminiscent of deep baked video game lore, and perhaps a close resemblance to Cormac McCarthy’s “The Road”, your writing style is rather interesting and easy to follow. The uncommon choice in protagonist for the story is also an interesting direction, one that I believe holds a lot of merit and intrigue. While I wouldn’t quite compare it to the excellent world building of overlord, it does have its own unique style.

Oh wow! I can see that your roleplay career has taken affect on your writing skill. This is a really creative and original idea, and I hope you have good fortune continuing to write it in the future!