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Doesn't receiving a ROB's blessing already seem like stupid armor to you? First of all, I don't even take seriously works where there is ROB giving blessings, but I suppose you should.
In short, voluntarily becoming a slave.
Isn't this another one of them? The protagonist gained super powers from a god and the writing is below average, although for someone like you this must seem brilliant.
It's difficult when the protagonist has this worldview and chooses to ignore it.
Yes, it is, but we ignore it.
I can't even imagine, but she must be a very attractive prostitute.
He's crazy lol
Overall, it's a decent read, but there are a few problems. The protagonist is a bit boring and it's tedious as everyone around him tries to sell a manipulative image of him "He's using me", and most of the time the protagonist doesn't do anything special, he's just a normal smart guy. But the most serious problem in history would be its development. For example, there was a chapter where half of it was just the protagonist's friend saying "We are friends" and the protagonist responding "We are not friends", and this goes on for a good part of the chapter, and so on. This same scene happens more frequently to the point of being irritating, in other examples. The pacing isn't exactly perfect either, despite having chapters every day, many of them are just fillers and take place in one place with a single subject. But these problems that I detected do not destroy the story, in my opinion. There is still a lot of potential, and all these problems will be resolved as the author gains experience, something similar happened with Tapov and I will kill the author.
Finally a fanfic about a Daniel who isn't a sissy, it took a while for one to appear hahaha I'm going to love reading every moment
Not necessarily, I like an indifferent protagonist, but it is also very necessary to have other points of view in the story, since it is the characters that give the work its soul.
Good chapter, the last few chapters have been a bit dragging, but a new point of view was refreshing. I hope Iske isn't sentimental with his family, the best thing to show to someone who abandoned you is indifference.
It's been a while since I read an interesting story of this genre, most are just bad copies of extra novels and the author's POV, this one is quite interesting so far and the MC is genuinely focused and evolving, I would just like other points of view.
Finally a protagonist who recognizes that he cannot be the false protagonist's helper and is going after power!!