Love_C_raft
sometimes it is hard, but have the courage to overcome the struggle, there are people of the future waiting for you, be it friends, family or love one. loneliness and depression may feel like a abyss but it is a hardest tribulation to overcome.
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Love_C_raft2dVerschicktdetailI Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be KingBücher und Literatur · Fangrove- Love_C_raft3dKommentiert
My name is flosh, let me tell you how I got here, I got struck with falling sunlight and I gained the spood force, great power come with great responsibility so I read in super spood, now here I am.
Ch 86 Pookie Bear Kale, Goten Enters the FielddetailReborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-SignAnime und Comics · Clay_Champion - Love_C_raft20dKommentiertCh 79 Victory
- Love_C_raft25dVerschickt
it needs improvements, there are almost no characters interaction and when it does it seems like 3rd person pov instead of mc, and you need to correct who is talking. plus saying out loud and inner thoughts, everything is very simple, no depths. the improvement you can make more dialogue between characters, and pov changes, you need to differentiate between changing scenes event and ongoing thoughts, English seem okay good luck.
- Love_C_raft25dKommentiert
please use " for talking out loud and ' for inner dialog.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Love_C_raft29dAntwortet auf Chasing_Dreams
mean if the money and everything given by system is for the wife, he has no control over his own happiness, you are saying that money is no use to him, you are making him a pet just for a wife.
*Ding: It is good to see that host has such a drive to move forward, however, host should understand that without his wife, all his money and fame would have no use. So, please make sure you give her proper attention.* - Love_C_raft29dKommentiertThe system replied in affirmative, Hao Ren nodded, and said, "I would like to assign two points to charm and two points to intelligence, and keep one point in reserve to be used later."
- Love_C_raft29dKommentiertHe felt like the System scammed him. The system replied *Ding: If it was that easy to break the limits of mediocrity then you would have no need of me. Get real.*
- Love_C_raft29dKommentiertFollowed by a rapid fire of questions, "Who is it? Is she from Han Nation? Tell me that she is not one of those dolls that young people use, also it better not be someone online, Hao Ren..."
- Love_C_raft29dKommentiert
yeah! finally, giving basic ability and learning themselves.
The system replied, *Host, do you think that investment is only considered investment when it is too big? Learn to take baby steps first and then dream of flying. Your current bank balance is 98,000 yuan. Get yourself together.* - Love_C_raft29dKommentiert
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Hao Ren smiled in reply, and did not say much. Han Lingshi checked the watch on her wrist and said, "I will be taking your leave now, it is pretty late." - Love_C_raft29dKommentiert
okay I'm slowly losing interest, should have given the basic and train himself.
*Ding: To encourage the host to take the initiative, in engaging with his wife, the host is rewarded with Master Class Chef skills. You are now a master of Oriental Cuisine modern and traditional variants. Good Luck!* - Love_C_raft29dKommentiert
okay this went from 10 to a 100, what the heck happen to him working hard for it?
Hao Ren stood outside the building with a copy of contract in his hand when the system said, *Ding: It has been detected that Han Lingshi has accepted your suggestion, issuing rewards: One penthouse apartment in Rising Sun Towers.* - Love_C_raft1mthKommentiertCh 26 Second blood
- Love_C_raft1mthKommentiert"Well if I cannot do it again, then I should not let myself have any regrets." Edward said with a mischievous smile before pulling both of the girls closer towards him again.
- Love_C_raft2mthAntwortet auf PerfectZero
the story was removed, and that wasn't a gacha or chat.
This was particularly obvious when his older brother left him with his sick sister and took all the money. - Love_C_raft2mthKommentiertCh 17 Just Another Day
- Love_C_raft2mthKommentiert
I need this, I haven't seen one in a while.
- One Punch Man - Love_C_raft2mthKommentiert
it's time for our boy to step up his game, john wick incoming.
A few minutes before, when Edward finally reached into the next room, the Russian receptionist held out her gun and pointed it to Edward's head, "You're coming with us."