Xavier_Dixon_9866

This story is really surprising! It went from a slice of life to straight up nonstop action. The recent chapters were filled with interesting and important information and It has lots of plotholes. The min two problems I have with the novel is character development and the writing quality. You need to improve on your grammar and stop saying unknown man so much. It makes the story way more confusing! I love Hiruka and his menacing side and I love the alliance between Taketa and Kiho. I can't wait for the dodgeball game and whats going to happen!