Kowleen

finally, an underrated book hiding in the dark corner of webnovel. I can see that the MC's motivation is clearly stated but I had to read up to a few chapters just to be clear. So his motivation is to find his mother in the edge of the server?

What the heck is this? I didn't even read past the first chapter...............................................................................

Quite plain for a starting paragraph. It would be better if you describe what they're feeling seeing this "red light".

Dayum....

The story is quite good. It's no wonder why many people read it and leave a good review. I wish more writers will learn from it. I'll be reading this from time to time. :)