I need more chapters! So good!

Totally agree.

Have been buying chapters this month, but this goes way 2 slow. If you actuallly want people 2 read your stuff you gotta make it interesting. Not boring and short like the last chapters.

Good writing🙏🏻

I like this novel generally but please dont make tenkus identity reaper like a baby. Dont make him explain himself like he is guilty. It doesnt fit his character. Ideally you should rewrite this chapter.

Well done! Favourite series atm. Also love that the price inst that high so it is possible to always stay on track👍

But why did he cultivate for 16 years then? Did he just sit in a cave for 14 yeara doing nothing? That seems weirder to me. Originalmy I thought this rule was specifically for humans, which is why I wrote the comment in the first place.

Seriously. Cultivating for 16 years to not get 1 major realm stronger? I wonder if you made a big mistake early, or if this book is gonna timeskip 50 and 100 years at a time soon to make up for this Seems kinda dumb to me. These are important things to think through.

Good. But I really hope you think about the power scaling here. Max seemed weak compared to these kids when you think about how long he have trained. This will become a boring series if max isnt much stronger than Ana, and it doesnt look like it is going in this direction. No direct criticism. Just something to think about.

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The first 100 chapers are just perfect. Love the mc, and everything about him. Writing is really good. Hope to see much more.

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good start:)

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Okay start. Usually dont read stories with so few chapters but are a fan of assassin stories so made an exception this time. Some unnessesary info dumps and little bad english. Also hope you up the chapter per week written to atleast 7. Best would have been if you could double that. In the start most people dont wanna read beacause of so few chapters so if they wanna start on something the updates need to be often. Atleast one everyday. Writing Quality: 3 Stability of Updates: 3 Story Development: 5 Character Design: 5 World Background: 4

Really bad ending, as well as a completely hopeless sequel. Definetely dont recommend. You will just be disappointed. I would rather spend my time elsewhere, and would definetely not read it again.

Read the first 50 chapters and I highly enjoyed it. Nes fresh take. I am just wondering if it is dropped? 9 months since the last update now. Shame to read a novel which wont be finished.

I would say it has been a great story, but the updating stability on the other hand is bad. I paid for 10 extra chapters, which havent been written. Said to update those chapters the 8. August which is 4 months ago. Even tho it is good, he is cheating us readers when he isnt updating or have readable chapters which are paid for.