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And yeah, I totally get it! Having too many ideas is great, but figuring out how to integrate them correctly into the story without making it feel forced is the real challenge. Balancing everything while keeping the story natural is tough!

A Space Space no Mi as a Special Paramecia is an interesting concept! Since space itself can be manipulated in so many ways, it could allow for spatial distortion, teleportation, gravity shifts, and even something extreme like erasing space entirely. If awakened, it might even let the user tear through reality itself. The idea of a Dance Dance Fruit as a counterpart to Sing Sing makes sense—maybe it enhances rhythm-based movement, agility, or even creates hypnotic effects through dance? And the 'Dialogue' weapon concept is unique, though I’ve already started giving the crew tailored weapons in my story, so I’m exploring different mechanics for them. I can’t promise I’ll use all of these, but I’ll see if I can fit some into the story!

Frankly speaking I have too people in mind. One is Vivi and other is shirahoshi. And I will gradually release the powers in the auxiliary chapters as the story progress.[img=recommend]

I'm going towards mythical based hito hito models. you can see in auxiliary chap. but the water based logia idea is good. i have some one in my mind whom i can allot that fruit. Nice bro. [img=recommend][img=update]

LOL this version is absolutely crazy! 😂 The idea of trolling enemies with bad luck and making anything you say come true is hilarious, but I think there’s way too much reality bending here. If the user can completely manipulate fate, make lies real, and guarantee every hit lands, then there’s no challenge at all. That’s actually why I created the Coin of Fate and Chaos! 🎲✨ It already provides a luck-based mechanic that feels powerful but stays balanced with random effects, conditions, and limitations. If I added full-blown fate control, it would break the system completely because there’d be no real stakes or risks. But man, let me say this—your devil fruit idea is dope! 🔥It is insane, and I love the concept. It's still a really fun and wild idea!

Heyy! 😊 Thanks for sharing your idea! The Uno-based Devil Fruit is really cool and super creative! ✨ But since I already have the Coin of Fate and Chaos, which is pretty luck-based 🎲, adding another ability that relies on randomness might slow down fights and feel a bit repetitive. For now, I’m looking for something that keeps up with the fast-paced action of one piece, but I really appreciate the effort you put into this! 😆🔥 Keep those ideas coming—I always enjoy hearing them!

Thank you so much for your support! I really appreciate it. I know not everyone will like my story, and that's okay, but hearing encouragement like this really means a lot. I'll keep doing my best! As for Sanji and Zoro, I'm planning for the entire crew to have Devil Fruits, so I’m thinking about which ones would suit them best. Just because I plan to give Zoro a Devil Fruit doesn’t mean his resolve as a swordsman or his goal to defeat Mihawk will change. He will still be a pure swordsman, and the fruit I plan for him will complement his skills rather than replace them, keeping him the same Zoro with only slight variations. I originally thought of a Susanoo-like ability but as a Devil Fruit for Zoro. Right now, I’m considering a Logia or Paramecia that fits his fighting style. I’m also thinking about the right fruits for Sanji, Usopp, and some future crew members. If you have any suggestions for ideas it's appreciated😊

Aah Sorry mistake on my side. ha ha...[img=nervous]

Yeah I know. But I planning how the story goes if everyone in crew has devil fruits. I want to see if I can take the story that way. That doesn't mean zoro, sanji character will have less effect. like susano for zoro. It will be unique experience. I don't know if anyone had included this idea somewhere but I would like give it a try. And it seems now-a-days I'm getting comments that my story is all AI. Even though I admit I use it to correct and find better words to include. it just make me feel like if I should continue my story because of these comments when my time spent for this easily considered as completely AI. So, can you tell if you feel like that way anywhere. It is much appreciated. I can try to improve.[img=recommend]

Hey, no worries! I’m sorry if my story didn’t meet your expectations. I honestly don’t understand why some feel it’s entirely AI-generated. I do use ChatGPT to help refine sentences or find the right words, but everything in my story comes from me. I hope I didn’t come across the wrong way—it’s just that when you put so much time and effort into something, it’s tough to hear that it’s not truly yours. But I get that not everyone will enjoy my writing, and that’s okay! Still, I really appreciate you giving my story a shot. Thanks for taking the time to read it![img=recommend]