Visal_Word_Smith

You describe her so well that I can tell she is an adorable person.

I am still learning to become a better writer, and I appreciate your compliment. I will continue to strive to do my best. I have checked out your work as well, and I noticed that it is filled with descriptive sentences that draw me into your story. You have a knack for telling rather than showing, and it is captivating.

with this much energy

I appreciate you taking the time to read my novel. I acknowledge that the first thirty chapters may be filled with repetition and information dumps, but I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.

The first chapter already give reader so much glimpse into female lead's perspective and how she see the world. Wow, nice job from the author. Moreover, you really know how to show and not tell, I find this kind of story to be very enjoyable to read. There are so much potential for this story!

Why do I feel attack?

I hope to see her character development and glow up, hopefully in the future chapters she becomes more mature in her own skin as well as become more resilience. But I am aware, it would takes many chapters for her to reach that stage so I will stick around.

He knows how to use his words like a sword that cut through even the most resilience steel.