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Bro you should read the chapters before you upload them because there are many small problems as you keep confusing him/her other than that keep it up it's good

Brother, it's hard to understand the story because you keep changing from first person to third person in the middle of a sentence

pic of the mc?

Listen, I don't want to sound like a hater, but serious, you had to go with the mc unconscious trope that he will lose, I don't hate the fanfic, I really love it google translate

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Question According to what I read, you say that Owen Knight is a few years older than the MC, so how is it going to be in the story while the main cast is in high school and the MC is going to be in middle school? (google translate)

The story was good until the mc became a pedophile .......................................................................................................

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I liked the story but because it's so slow it will take at least 800 chapters to reach the time skip and that's not my cup of tea

I'm sorry, I really want to read this story, but it's hard for me to read a story with a MC who hides his powers -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------