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Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

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Dear readers, Hello! I'm Homeless Traveler, a newcomer in creative writing!

2022-08-01 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    But the teacher said to exclude rune, incantation and magic circle?

    The first would be the incantations that summon spell circles.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    Bro, did you just experience a flood? Hope you're save

    Ch 10 Exposed
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    This dialogue is a bit confusing...

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    They who?

    "If I find it interesting enough, I might help you hide from the academy. They have already started the investigation to look for a dark creature" he smirked
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Verschickt

    The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Antwortet auf Aira_Rin

    Thank you for your reviews!

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teenager · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Antwortet auf Rin_Nurnia

    Thank you so much for your reviews!

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teenager · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Verschickt

    The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Verschickt

    The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!

    The Deal With The Deviless
    Fantasie · BLACK_LIGHT_
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    I think you also need to put 'abusive content warning' at the start of this chapter

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    I wonder why the police didn't take the kids to psychologists...

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    This might be a wild idea, but I think a predator is scarier than a predictor...

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Antwortet auf Zieve1

    Thank you for your reviews! :D

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teenager · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Verschickt

    I must say that I haven't read a story like this ever in my life. Moreover, the writing is very neat, so I could enjoy the story smoothly. Looking forward to how the story will turn out!

    钱花光了
    Sport · Zieve1
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Antwortet auf appricotblossom

    you're welcome!

    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantasie · appricotblossom
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    looking good, i see

    Ch 24 Journey, II
    Absolute Transcendent: Dimension Traverse
    Fantasie · ItsHashi
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert
    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantasie · appricotblossom
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Kommentiert

    Still some punctuation errors here and there. Hope it gets better next chapter

    Ch 9 Undeserved Revenge
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Antwortet auf Eclipse_Ranger

    thank you for your reviews, kind reader! :D

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Teenager · Homeless_Traveler
    detail